What’s Your WIP for Emberling!

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Hey folks! Itโ€™s my turn to post and I have no idea what to post soโ€ฆ.Iโ€™m doing the โ€˜Whatโ€™s Your WIP Tagโ€™ unofficially for my current WIP Emberling! So, here goes nothing! I’m super excited to share a little bit about Emberling with you guys!

Has your WIP a working title? If so, tell us! If not, have you any idea of what it might be?

Right now the working title is Emberling, Iโ€™m not sure if that will be the official title, but I think it will beโ€ฆlolโ€ฆfor lack of a better idea. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Have you a synopsis for your WIP? If so, give it to us! If not, can you give us a blurb on what your WIP is about?

This is the unofficial blurb, Iโ€™ve tweaked it a bit since I first wrote it, but the basic plot is the same.

Iya is an Emberling, a race of people charged by Elohim to shepherd Englewood by using the fire in their blood to contain the creatures and monsters within the forest. But the mistakes of a few have sent her people into hiding. Men hunt them like beasts, killing every Emberling in sight.

Malcolm Cabe has one goal in life, to destroy the Emberlings, a task he feels Elohim would approve of. The creatures are hard to catch but everyone that dies means the world of Eriu is closer to peace. But when he rescues a girl from the clutches of slaving giants, he never intended to fall for her. But Iya is unlike any girl he has ever met.

Betrayal is inevitable, Iya will break his heart and Malcolm will shatter hers, but can the two of them put the pieces back together and learn to trust each other before itโ€™s too late for everyone?

Thatโ€™s the basic summary-ish thingโ€ฆthe last paragraph is a pain, and I canโ€™t seem to get it rightโ€ฆlolโ€ฆ

Have you a working/mock cover for your WIP? If so, show us! If not, have you an idea in mind?

Not at this momentโ€ฆbummer, but Jaidie and I have been talking about what I want the cover to look like! I want a dual cover, so the top half will be Iya and fire and forest, and the bottom half will be Malcolm and meadows and suchโ€ฆ

How did you get the idea for this story?

Funny story, Iโ€™ve had the main premise of Emberling (currently known as The Last Emberling) for years! Iya just never had a nameโ€ฆlolโ€ฆbut sheโ€™s been around since I started writing pretty much. I wanted her to be the last of her kind, but when I talked to my parents about it they pointed out that the storyline was pretty popular and suggested some changes which became Emberling! (Such as my mom mentioning that the Emberlings needed a purposeโ€ฆso they became Shepherds of the forest, thanks mom!)

How long do you think it will be? Is it longer or shorter than you thought it would be?

Right now, itโ€™s sitting at a little over 50k, itโ€™s shorter than I thought, right nowโ€ฆbut I also always forget that my first drafts are just the bones. I have tons of scenes to add in because the story moves much too fast. So, when I actually finish the first the book and then the first round of edits it will be much longer, I believe.

Whoโ€™s your favourite character so far?

So far, that would Malcolmโ€ฆheโ€™s like me in a lot of ways. Doesnโ€™t know how to verbally express his feelings, feels he needs to protect those around him and is pretty resentful (guilt as charged, *hangs head*.) But heโ€™s also much braver than me and so caring itโ€™s painful sometimesโ€ฆheโ€™s afraid of horses, and the banter between him and his friend Ben is priceless! And so fun to write!

Whatโ€™s your favourite memory related to this WIP?

Probably the moment I hit 50k and finished Nano! Woo-hoo! It felt really good and I was so proud of myself for passing that goal and writing so much in a month!

Any special person(s) who helped create it?

My sisters were a huge help with ideas and things to keep the plot movingโ€ฆand Grace A. Johnson shared some of her romance wisdom with me, and that was so much help! Like so much help!

Whatโ€™s your favourite scene so far (if you can tell about it without spoilers!)?

Ooof, I canโ€™t tell it without spoilersโ€ฆsorry folks. Itโ€™s a really good one that Malcolm has when he realizes some things and I just love it!

Can you give us a snippet?

Sure thingโ€ฆ.let me fetch one!

All evening Malcolm and I made eye contact and then broke it almost as quickly, but always I was drawn to look for him again. To gaze into the depths of his green eyes and look for that spark, that flicker that had been there before Ben had offered us coffee.

I sipped at the cup in my hand, the bitter brew nothing like the tea my people made. My eyes caught Malcolmโ€™s again and an almost visible spark radiated between us.

This was madness. There was no way I could be with him, no way we could ever make a life together, so what was this about? He had to knowโ€ฆ

But he didnโ€™t know. He didnโ€™t know what kind of blood ran through my veins or that my scared duty, given to me by Elohim Himself, was to keep the creatures of the forest contained. He knew next to nothing about me, except that he had rescued me from the giants.

Emberling by Kaytlin Phillips

And one from Malโ€™s point of view!

โ€œIโ€™m going to check on the horses.โ€

โ€œWe only left them a half hour ago?โ€ I called after him.

โ€œI know,โ€ Ben popped his head back into the room and rubbed the back of his neck.

โ€œOh I see,โ€ I raised an eyebrow. โ€œYes, I get it now. Well, your secret is safe with me.โ€

Ben raised an eyebrow. โ€œWhat are you talking about, Mal?โ€

I ran a hand through my hair and leaned back against the wall, crossing my arms. โ€œJust the fact that youโ€™re in love with your horse, I canโ€™t believe I hadnโ€™t noticed that you and Fumi were together.โ€

Ben looked around for something to throw at me and finding nothing chuckled and shook his head as he left. โ€œYou are sadly mistaken, Mal, Iโ€™m not the love sick one.โ€

Emberling by Kaytlin Phillips

Is the story still what you thought it would be or has it thrown you a couple curveballs?

For the most part it is what I thought it would be, the ending was never plotted very well because Iโ€™m a pantser who tried to outlineโ€ฆlolโ€ฆbut itโ€™s coming together rather nicely!

Is there a Bible verse, poem, hymn, picture, or quote that helped shape this story?

Romans 3:23 was a verse thatโ€™s come to mind as Iโ€™ve been writing. Lots of pictures have been inspiringโ€ฆsee further down for more on that. But mostly, itโ€™s just been the great outdoors, lots of imagination, and the Lord.

When and where have you done most of the writing so far?

In the evening, between 10:30 and 11:30, at my desk, which I call โ€˜The Burrowโ€™! I have a loft bed (because my room is very smallโ€ฆlolโ€ฆ) so underneath is where my desk is, in nice little cubby which I like to dub โ€˜The Burrowโ€™!

Where do you get inspiration for this story?

Songs, Pinterestโ€ฆeverywhere! Lolโ€ฆ.but mostly my playlist and Pinterest board! Which you can look at here and here!

Are you a plotter or a pantser?

Definitely a pantser, though I have fallen in love with the term Discovery writer, sounds nicer than pantserโ€ฆlolโ€ฆ

Do you have a little ritual before you start writing?

Not reallyโ€ฆexcept I usually start a sprint with a friend or two and put the dog to bed, so I guessโ€ฆ.sort ofโ€ฆlolโ€ฆ

Are you thinking of publishing this story?

Definitely! I just havenโ€™t decided when or where or how??? But I definitely want to publish it!

What things have you learned while writing this story?

Iโ€™ve learned a lot about forgiveness and not judging people by who they are related to or what people they know have done, or even what they look like. Holding grudges and anger toward someone or a group of people in Malcolmโ€™s situation is definitely something that I need to work on because I tend to be very unforgiving when Iโ€™m wronged, or more often, when someone I love is wronged. So, the Lord has been teaching me a lot in that area!

Conclusion

And that’s all! Is there anything else you would like to know about Emberling? Drop your questions in the comments and I’ll answer them if I can….lol…I hope you enjoyed this post!

Are you plotter, pantser, or plantser? Do you prefer the term discovery writer or pantser? What do you think of Emberling? Most importantly do you like horses?

Bless!

Kayti


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  7. Rose Avatar
    Rose

    Where did you get the term “Emberling”? Reminded me of “The Green Ember” lol,
    It sounds like the primary themes are going to be forgiveness and honesty. Love the setting, and the cover sounds perfect.

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    1. Kayti Avatar

      It just kind of came with the character…lol…for years Iya didn’t have a name only a concept called an Emberling. I thought it sounded whimsical. ๐Ÿ™‚
      Yes! Awww! Thank you! Now it’s just *ahem* figuring out the end…lol…

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  8. Abi Sacco Avatar
    Abi Sacco

    Your story sounds so epic! I love the characters so much!!! Already I think I will like them, and those snippets are really intriguing! I prefer the term discovery writer, it sounds so cool! Also horses are amazing!

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    1. Kayti Avatar

      Thank you so much, Abi! I’m so glad you think it sounds cool! Means a lot! Haha, yes me too! Agreed! Horses are the best!

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  9. Lillian-Keith Avatar

    Discovery writer sounds more adventurous! (Now I must find a cooler name for plotters and writers in between lol.)

    That’s some great advice from your mom! I look forward to hearing more about this story ๐Ÿ™‚ (I can tell I’m really going to like Malcolm and Iya).

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    1. Kayti Avatar

      I thought so too! (Oh, the inbetween writers are called Hybrid Writers…and sorry don’t have a cooler name for Plotters expect Planners…lol…)

      Thank you! (Hehe, I hope so!)

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      1. Lillian-Keith Avatar

        That makes sense. I guess Planners will have to do for now. I’ve always wanted to be some variation of a notebook ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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      2. Kayti Avatar

        Hahaha…Planners it is…lol…

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  10. Moriyah C Avatar

    Emberling looks SO good! I cannot wait to read this book! ๐Ÿ˜
    I am a MAJOR plotter! XD
    I love horses! โค

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    1. Kayti Avatar

      Thank you so very much! Means so much!
      Haha, good for you! My pieces never want to fit together so I just wing it…lol…
      Me too!

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      1. Moriyah C Avatar

        You are so welcome! โ™ฅ๏ธ
        Thank you! I need things to have a plan so it works for me, lol! Thatโ€™s still good! Iโ€™m glad you found your writing style!
        Yay!!!

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      2. Kayti Avatar

        Awesom, to each their own as the old saying goes…and one of my new favorite quotes is “There is no one right way to write a novel.”

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      3. Moriyah C Avatar

        Yes! That is very true!
        I love that quote!!

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  11. Grace A. Johnson Avatar
    Grace A. Johnson

    AH! I am SO excited for this!! It was my pleasure to lend you a hand, girl!! โค

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    1. Kayti Avatar

      Eeek! Thank you! Ack, I’m so glad your excited! I’m excited too! I was just starting to have an idea for how I wanted it to end and now my laptop is on the fritz….ack! I hope it gets fixed soon!

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  12. Joelle Stone Avatar
    Joelle Stone

    This is SUCH a cool story concept! Looking forward to it!

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    1. Kayti Avatar

      Thank you so much, Joelle!!!

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  13. Vanessa Hall Avatar

    Ah, I’m so excited to read this book! ๐Ÿ™‚ Hehe, and “discovery” writer. I like it! ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Kayti Avatar

      Eeek! I can’t wait to finish it so I’m one step closer to sharing it! Haha, I’m glad you agree!

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  14. Saraina Avatar
    Saraina

    Oh my, I can’t wait to read this!!!! I LOVED this snippets (I have a feeling I’ll be cracking up a lot at Malcom and Ben’s conversations XD) and ahh, the Pinterest boards are so cool!! Such a mood. ๐Ÿ˜‰ The whole thing sounds so creative and original and I just know I’ll love it!! ๐Ÿ˜€ (Lol, and same about the “discovery” vs “pantser” terms. Discovery writers sounds so much more…thrilling!)

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    1. Kayti Avatar

      Ack! Thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked it! (Hehe, the boys definitely crack me up, Ben is so teasing and like a brother to Mal and it’s just…I love their dynamic!) Eeep! I’m glad you like the pinterest board! (Haha, exactly! I think u shall start calling myself a Discovery writer instead…lol…)

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  15. Kristina Hall Avatar

    This sounds so good!!

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    1. Kayti Avatar

      Thank you so much! โค

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