The Sun

Hello friends, I’m not sure how to start this but I’m gonna give this a whirl…lol…I’m going to do a poem, I think…I hope…here it goes…

Its pretty in all its glory

Its bright like a smile in the sky

Its blinding with its beauty

Its warm with its gentle rays

It brings life and lights the way

It hangs in the sky, so ever high

You can’t escape, its everywhere

Over the rise, behind the cloud

Gone for a moment but never long

And when it returns it shines all the brighter

Reminding me it’s gonna be alright!

Tada! I did it!!! Yay!!! My first poem ever!! Tell me what you think…all you poets can laugh at me…lol…but I did my best!

God Bless,


Published by Rissy

Hiya, my name is Marisa Phillips but please call me Rissy. I love writing, music, dragons, phoenixes (Flaming birds? Come on, that's awesome!) lions, foxes, rabbits, dogs (I also like a tons of other animals but don't have room to list them), baking with my mom, teasing my sisters, cuddling with our dog Ruger, and trying to make other people smile!

4 thoughts on “The Sun

  1. That was so pretty!!!! I can’t believe that was your first poem!!! lol I am SO not laughing at you; that was really good. 🙂 The thought of the sun being a smile in the sky is so heart-warming… I’ve never heard that comparison before and I love it. If you got around to writing more poems, please share them!!! ❤ 😀

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