Hello friends, I’m not sure how to start this but I’m gonna give this a whirl…lol…I’m going to do a poem, I think…I hope…here it goes…
Its pretty in all its glory
Its bright like a smile in the sky
Its blinding with its beauty
Its warm with its gentle rays
It brings life and lights the way
It hangs in the sky, so ever high
You can’t escape, its everywhere
Over the rise, behind the cloud
Gone for a moment but never long
And when it returns it shines all the brighter
Reminding me it’s gonna be alright!
Tada! I did it!!! Yay!!! My first poem ever!! Tell me what you think…all you poets can laugh at me…lol…but I did my best!
God Bless,
Rissy
I’m not a poet, but I really like this one!
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Thank you so much!
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That was so pretty!!!! I can’t believe that was your first poem!!! lol I am SO not laughing at you; that was really good. 🙂 The thought of the sun being a smile in the sky is so heart-warming… I’ve never heard that comparison before and I love it. If you got around to writing more poems, please share them!!! ❤ 😀
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Awww, thank you so much!!! So glad you liked it!!! Sure thing, if not here then I might share them over on NS…
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