The Sun

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Hello friends, I’m not sure how to start this but I’m gonna give this a whirl…lol…I’m going to do a poem, I think…I hope…here it goes…

Its pretty in all its glory

Its bright like a smile in the sky

Its blinding with its beauty

Its warm with its gentle rays

It brings life and lights the way

It hangs in the sky, so ever high

You can’t escape, its everywhere

Over the rise, behind the cloud

Gone for a moment but never long

And when it returns it shines all the brighter

Reminding me it’s gonna be alright!

Tada! I did it!!! Yay!!! My first poem ever!! Tell me what you think…all you poets can laugh at me…lol…but I did my best!

God Bless,

Rissy


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4 responses to “The Sun”

  1. Kristina Hall Avatar

    I’m not a poet, but I really like this one!

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    1. Rissy Avatar
      Rissy

      Thank you so much!

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  2. Saraina Avatar
    Saraina

    That was so pretty!!!! I can’t believe that was your first poem!!! lol I am SO not laughing at you; that was really good. 🙂 The thought of the sun being a smile in the sky is so heart-warming… I’ve never heard that comparison before and I love it. If you got around to writing more poems, please share them!!! ❤ 😀

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      Rissy

      Awww, thank you so much!!! So glad you liked it!!! Sure thing, if not here then I might share them over on NS…

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